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AG-James Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

My Motivation Letter, need urgent feedback.

0 With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at the XXX as a XXX student. For the last two years I have been studying at the YYY Technical University majoring in Electronics & Telecommunications. There were several reasons for my choosing the profession of an engineer. First, working in this field involves challenging your abilities: it applies a lot of modern technology and you have to keep up with that all the time. Second, in our globalizing world there will always be a growing need for specialists of this kind. As much as I enjoy studying I can't help but realize that an opportunity to attend a Swedish university will give me a lot of unique experience both professional and personal. It is always interesting for me to look at things I know from a different point of view. For instance, I'd like to learn how applying modern technology in my field helps protecting the environment. And I am sure in Sweden, where such matters are traditionally important, I will be able to. Also I am looking forward to a chance to see new places and meet new people. Who knows, maybe I will make a few lifetime friends and will keep in touch with them after we graduate and start working. I'm sure making such contacts is one of the goals of this program and that's why I am willing to participate in it. I think I am quite ready for studying abroad. I love challenges and testing my abilities. I enjoy investigating the subject matter. On the other hand I can work in a team, and in fact, like it a lot. Unknown environment doesn't usually scare me, I can adapt quite easily. Besides there is a lot to see in Sweden, and I am not going to miss the opportunity. I am a very active person - I took up a number of sports: football, table tennis, volleyball. So, I am not afraid of hard work and I know what it takes to achieve your goals. Thus, I am sure studying in Sweden will be very profitable professionally and extremely interesting for me. And this is why I have applied for this program. 0-
  

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02br 02br 00Best wishes02br 02br 00MrP02br 02hr 00With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at the ZZZ as a ZZZ student. For the last two years I have been studying at the ZZZ Technical University majoring in Electronics & Telecommunications. There were several reasons for my choosing the profession of an engineer.

— MrPedantic

  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes02br 02br 00MrP02br 02hr 00With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at the ZZZ as a ZZZ student.
  • For the last two years I have been studying at the ZZZ Technical University majoring in Electronics & Telecommunications.
  • There were several reasons for my choosing the profession of an engineer.
  • First, working in this field 01u 00involves challenging your abilities:02u 00 it applies 01u 00a lot of02u 00 modern technology and you have to keep up with that all the time.
  • Second, in our globalizing world there will always be a growing need for specialists of this kind.
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00Obviously I can't amend the letter; but I've underlined some parts that may need further attention (mostly from a grammatical point of view).02br
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00Since the letter will find its way into the maw of Google shortly, I've also removed the identifying features.02br
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00Best wishes02br
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