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CatsTherapist Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
My motivation letter for a Master's, fluidity and other issues!
Dear All,
I'm writing my motivation letter for a Master's programme and I'm struggling. I have several problems, starting with my difficulties facing the wrote English. Besides, I'm afraid that I can't make my letter "fluid" no matter how hard I try. So I would like to ask your opinion about what I wrote here, not only about the form but also if the substance is eloquent and convincing enough! Thank you so much in advance guys, I will appreciate any kind of help!
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am applying to your Master’s programme of “XXX" with specialisation in “XXX" starting in February 2016. I am very interested in beginning a career in business and I am certain that this Bachelor’s programme will help me to fulfil myself in both professional and personal contexts.
I graduated in 2014, from the XXX, in Italy, and I hold a Bachelors degree in “XXX”, which focuses on language and cultural aspects of the francophone and arabophone areas. In 2012, I went to XXX as an Erasmus student. The core of my classes and lectures dealt with French linguistics and phonetics. During the Bachelors I developed an increasing interest on the Arab culture and I focused my thesis on the Egyptian dialect. Besides the college academics, I was actively involved in these extra-curricular activities: I attended two courses in Cairo to improve my arabic language skills, I took part in a project of an Italian NGO which aims to teach Italian language to migrants by “tandem language sessions”. In 2013, I was also member of the students’ Jury of the XXX Festival, which promotes intercultural dialogue and commercial cooperation between Europe and the Mediterranean countries.
Besides, for the past thirteen months I have been working in a private sector company and my work has helped me to develop the conviction of returningto the academic world for further growth. In those years I matured an increasing interest towards the Arab world and I would love to make of it my area of expertise for the development of my future career.
My decision to pursue my studies in the Netherlands is stressed by my desire to be a part of the postgraduate programme at your institution, which benefits of an ancient prestige. I spent a long time researching the right Master’s course and my aspiration is to study in a programme that gives me the opportunity to specialise in this thematic field, with a research and critical focus. Furthermore, I would love to study again in a cross-cultural environment, therefore all these criteria combined came up with the XXX as the only possible and desirable solution.
With my academic qualifications and desire to study, I am confident that I am qualified and able to perform well in this program. I also believe that I can make a significant contribution to this programme. At the same time I am aware of the challenges and efforts I will have to locate in order to successfully complete this course.
Thank you in advance for considering my application, I look forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
I'm writing my motivation letter for a Master's programme and I'm struggling. I have several problems, starting with my difficulties facing the wrote English. Besides, I'm afraid that I can't make my letter "fluid" no matter how hard I try. So I would like to ask your opinion about what I wrote here, not only about the form but also if the substance is eloquent and convincing enough! Thank you so much in advance guys, I will appreciate any kind of help!
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am applying to your Master’s programme of “XXX" with specialisation in “XXX" starting in February 2016. I am very interested in beginning a career in business and I am certain that this Bachelor’s programme will help me to fulfil myself in both professional and personal contexts.
I graduated in 2014, from the XXX, in Italy, and I hold a Bachelors degree in “XXX”, which focuses on language and cultural aspects of the francophone and arabophone areas. In 2012, I went to XXX as an Erasmus student. The core of my classes and lectures dealt with French linguistics and phonetics. During the Bachelors I developed an increasing interest on the Arab culture and I focused my thesis on the Egyptian dialect. Besides the college academics, I was actively involved in these extra-curricular activities: I attended two courses in Cairo to improve my arabic language skills, I took part in a project of an Italian NGO which aims to teach Italian language to migrants by “tandem language sessions”. In 2013, I was also member of the students’ Jury of the XXX Festival, which promotes intercultural dialogue and commercial cooperation between Europe and the Mediterranean countries.
Besides, for the past thirteen months I have been working in a private sector company and my work has helped me to develop the conviction of returningto the academic world for further growth. In those years I matured an increasing interest towards the Arab world and I would love to make of it my area of expertise for the development of my future career.
My decision to pursue my studies in the Netherlands is stressed by my desire to be a part of the postgraduate programme at your institution, which benefits of an ancient prestige. I spent a long time researching the right Master’s course and my aspiration is to study in a programme that gives me the opportunity to specialise in this thematic field, with a research and critical focus. Furthermore, I would love to study again in a cross-cultural environment, therefore all these criteria combined came up with the XXX as the only possible and desirable solution.
With my academic qualifications and desire to study, I am confident that I am qualified and able to perform well in this program. I also believe that I can make a significant contribution to this programme. At the same time I am aware of the challenges and efforts I will have to locate in order to successfully complete this course.
Thank you in advance for considering my application, I look forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
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- The core of my classes and lectures dealt with French linguistics and phonetics.
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Dear Sir or Madam:
I am applying to your Master’s programme of “Financial Economics" with a specialisation in “Islamic commercial jurisprudence" starting in February 2016. I am very interested in beginning a career in business and I am certain that this Bachelor’s (Be consistent in what you are applying for) programme will help
I am applying to your Master’s programme of “Financial Economics" with a specialisation in “Islamic commercial jurisprudence" starting in February 2016. I am very interested in beginning a career in business and I am certain that this Bachelor’s (Be consistent in what you are applying for) programme will help
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