My motivation letter, could someone give me some suggestion?

0 01b00 I am preparing the application for Master degree in Germany. My major is Biology in Taiwan. I am wondering whether my article is too general? Or do I miss some important part of a motivation letter? Thanks for someone to help me!!!!02b02br
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00 00After Studying Biology at 00 for total four years, I make up my mind to save the limited resource on earth.00 00And I decided to continue my Masters degree in 00Sustainable Resource Management at 00Technische Universität München in 00 where00 I found what I had been looking for.02br
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00In the second year of my college life, I have helped a professor to accomplish a project which intends to increase the biodiversity in 010200.00 00During the two month, I get up early at 6:00, and go into the mountain until raining.00 00Although it blankets all of my time, I love working in the mountain.00 00I enjoy researching in the forest with different people, and get consensus to solve a problem.00 00Also, when I get involve in this environmental practice, I realize the significance of conservation.00 00The artificial forest doesn’t embrace a variety of trees, and the other animals, such as insects and amphibian, are also rare.00 00 02br
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00Moreover, I also went to 00 to study “tropical ecology” when I was a senior.00 00I spent two weeks beside the tropical forest, and had experiment everyday in it.00 00In the field research, the classmates are grouped, and each group has different issues.00 00We collect data first, and design method to analysis it.00 00Then the member exchange different point of views on their own.00 00In the process of solving problems, I realize the joy of ironing the difficulties and the importance of team work. 00 00During this experience, I learn better communication and cooperation skills which are essential to get along with international students.00 00Discovering the desire of protect the forest and maintain the biodiversity, I decide to acquire further education to meet my need.02br
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00My aspirations lie in the field of forest and wildlife conservation, and I would like to work for conservation agencies or some environmental organizations.00 00Your program provides me a good combination of academic knowledge and useful technique which could contribute to my future work.00 00I also aim to obtain planning and leadership skills from it. 00 00Besides, instead of acquiring knowledge only, the internship is crucial for me to start my future job earlier.00 00I believe your program will fulfill my crave to have my knowledge developed to a higher standard.02br
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00Chen, Szu-chieh02br
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