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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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My mother is dead
My mother had been walking down the street, when all of a sudden, a giant piece of clay pottery, travelling with such rapidity, did slice through her skull like a knife slicers through butter. An inquest revealed that the clay had been thrown out of a second story window by a disgruntled spinster, who after having been making clay pottery for her deceased husband all morning, was dissatisfied with the pottery she had been sculpting.
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Some alternatives: My mother had been walking down the street, when all of a sudden, a giant piece of clay pottery, travelling with such rapidity, did slice through her skull like a knife slicers through butter. An inquest revealed that the clay had been thrown out of a second story window by a disgruntled widow , who after having been making clay pottery for her deceased husband all morning, was dissatisfied with the pottery she had sculpted .
- Some alternatives: My mother had been walking down the street, when all of a sudden, a giant piece of clay pottery, travelling with such rapidity, did slice through her skull like a knife slicers through butter.
- An inquest revealed that the clay had been thrown out of a second story window by a disgruntled widow , who after having been making clay pottery for her deceased husband all morning, was dissatisfied with the pottery she had sculpted .
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My mother had been walking down the street, when all of a sudden, a giant piece of clay pottery, travelling with such rapidity, did slice through her skull like a knife slicers through butter. An inquest revealed that the clay had been thrown out of a second story window by a disgruntled widow, who after having been making clay pottery for her deceased husband al
My mother had been walking down the street, when all of a sudden, a giant piece of clay pottery, travelling with such rapidity, did slice through her skull like a knife slicers through butter. An inquest revealed that the clay had been thrown out of a second story window by a disgruntled widow, who after having been making clay pottery for her deceased husband al
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My mother was walking down the street when suddenly; A giant piece of clay pottery travelling at high speed sliced through her skull, just as a knife cutting butter.The inquest revealed the pottery had been thrown from a second story window by a disgruntled widow, who had been dissatisfied after working all day on a sculpture for her deceased husband.
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