My lyrics, what do you think?

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00This is my lyrics, I will be so happy if you write your oinion about them.02br
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00And, also, what are the feelings they provoke in you?02br
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00Thanx beforehand.02br
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00 Icy surface broiling02br
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00The reasos forgot02br
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00It all means nothing now02br
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00The life and the death, 02br
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00the peace and the raw02br
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00Still water alluring me( to clear to con?)02br
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00The presence rejecting me02br
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00I’m going, I am gone02br
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00The icy surface broiling, 02br
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00I told you I was going.02br
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00When I reach the bottom I will call you darling02br
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00Here is the place that will save us forever02br
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00If you care about me, you you will come to me, darling02br
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00That’s the only chance to bring us together02br
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00Chorus:02br
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• 00Give me your hand,02li
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• 00Put your past on the shelf02li
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• 00Hold out your hand02li
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• 00I will seize it myself.02li
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00Amazing, yeah, the place we are at,02br
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00Forget you are breathing, it’s your new habitat02br
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00How come you let go?02br
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00Come back, you don’t see 02br
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00how cruel’s the world you are choosing to me02br
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00I promise I will watch and wait02br
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00While you are suffering your fate02br
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00At last, I enthralling and clammy02br
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00Will watch you come to me…02br
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