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1oVVa Posted 15 years ago
Song Writing & Lyrics

My lyrics need your review!

So, here's the thread I'll be filling with my lyrics. I'd like to see someone's comments about it.

First one:

No(W) More Hate

I Forgive you all
Will you forgive me
For all the things I have done
To enable your anger

Will you demand for contribution?
Or let me live
My past life of wrath and distrust?

I have no will to change me
Though, I’ve no will to change you

I give it up
No more ‘messiah’ shit for me

I won’t tell you what you should do
If you want it, you’ll get it yourself
I will not walk around you
For the sake of my profit
I realized that I have failed
All attempts of getting out of my grave
I’ve lost my rage but still
I won’t claim that I have no more hate

Invidious face of life
Rubs on my leg
Like a shadow of black cat

Deflections of my mind
Raise a new god from the ashes
Of hatred and depravity

I have no will to cure me
Though, I see no way of doing it

I clear my mind from the
Rust of compassion
But still I don’t care about you

I won’t tell you what you should do
If you want it, you’ll get it yourself
I will not walk around you
For the sake of my profit
I realized that I have failed
All attempts of getting out of my grave
I’ve lost my rage but still
I won’t claim that I have no more hate
  

Top answer

I like it. I like songs about hatred in general, like Duskmon's theme song in Digimon Frontier.

  • I like it.
  • I like songs about hatred in general, like Duskmon's theme song in Digimon Frontier.
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I like it. I like songs about hatred in general, like Duskmon's theme song in Digimon Frontier.

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