I am writing this to let you know my feelings for you. ive been holding my feelings back from u because im not sure what will happen to our friendship. i know i may not ever show my feelings, but thats because i dont want you to feel uncomfortable around me if you didnt feel the same way. for a while now i tried to get over the feelings i have for u and it would work but only for a few days, but after a few days ill be sitting there and ill think about u and how wonderful u are. ive never ever felt this way about anyone and i cant even explain how it feels. its the best feeling in the world, but at the same time its not because we arnt together. as time went on the feelings just got stronger and stronger and i cant hold back anymore, i need to tell u exactly how i feel. i need you to know that i care for u deeply and i am always here for u no matter what. That you are the most beautiful and stunning girl i have ever layed eyes on. i want you to know your the person i think about whenever im in a bad mood or working long hours, thinking of u puts a smile on my face when nothing else would. You always have my unspoken passion Although I might not seem to care. I just want you to know that i think your the most beautiful girl in the world, i care for you, and im here for you always whether we are just friends or more.
this letter is to my best friend, i need to tell her how i feel. i know this letter needs some work, its just a rough draft, any pointers will be much apreciated
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Sorry, I am no John Alden. Any decent letter, however, must spell I and you properly. Also, apostrophes are a valuable tool of literacy.
— Mister Micawber
Sorry, I am no John Alden.
Any decent letter, however, must spell I and you properly.
Also, apostrophes are a valuable tool of literacy.
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The sentence in red is redundant since you're expressing your feelings now. I'm instead connecting the words 'friendship' and 'because'. Also you need a heading and an ending, something intimate since it's a love letter. You can change them into some other words if you so wish.
***** all what ever anybody said , point of letter is your telling somebody how you feel , whats in your heart , and i am guessing if its how i felt it isnt all correct neat , and **** . mate say it from the heart and thats all you can do , be who you are , forget grammar literacy , just say whats going on in your heart , and if you do that , youve got a chance , as you want the person to love yo