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Stevenukd Posted 19 years ago
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MY LOVE

0Dear Teachers,02br
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001. Don't ever believe in what she says, honey!, she just wants to separate us. She does so just because she can't obtain my love. You also know that I love you with all my heart and soul, right?02br
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00- Is this ok to say?02br
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00Thanks very much to Teachers,02br
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00 Stevenukd.0-
  

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02br 02br 01i 00Don't ever01b 00 believe what02b 00 she says, honey! 01b 00She 02b 00just wants to separate01b 00 us because02b 00 she can't 01b 00get me to love her02b 00. 02i 02br 02br 01i 00Obtain 02i 00is too formal0-

  • 02br 02br 01i 00Don't ever01b 00 believe what02b 00 she says, honey!
  • 01b 00She 02b 00just wants to separate01b 00 us because02b 00 she can't 01b 00get me to love her02b 00.
  • 02i 02br 02br 01i 00Obtain 02i 00is too formal0-
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0The grammar is pretty good, Steven, but the register and flow is off.02br
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01i00Don't ever01b00 believe what02b00 she says, honey! 01b00She 02b00just wants to separate01b00 us because02b00 she can't 01b00get me to love her02b00. 01b00You know02b00

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