MY life for presontation

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because my English is not good enough.

i will have a persontation tomorrow, but i don't know if my persontation is correct.

so could everyone help me to correct my writing. i will thank you a lot. have a nice day

My life

My name is jay, I was born in Taiwan.i have two sblings, younger sister and tiwns brother. My twins brother, my sister and I were raised by grandmother and cousins because my parents were busy in their work. My brother and I always played together and learned together, so we are extremely tight knit. Even if we seldom get together with my parents, but we really love each other.



When I was in elementary school. I was a good student. I got a lot of good grades and certificates and started to play organ. but after I went in to junior hight school at the time I went crazy about online games. So I became a bad student. But I also continue to paly organ and had student’s organ performances . my life seems boring. Just only games, basketball and organ. Untill I studyed in sunior hight school. I had a big change. I started to be interested in girl. Yeah. You got it, I fell in love. But girl didn’t like me, because I had bad looking and fat. Eventually, I was falling out of love. I was so sad and disappointed. And that results me made determination about losing weight, so I made plan about on the diet, so i didn’t eat dinner and drink beverages but water and did exercise. I’d lost 12 Kilograms in two months. And I started to dress up and quited to play games forever. Studdently, my life became colorful, many girls liked me and gave me love cards and chocolates. And I met friends who didn’t like studying like me. i enjoyed this feeling.



when I graduated in high school to go another city to study university, I chose math for my major. Because my any subjects were terrible except math I was always the best in class. My university classmates were freak nerds and were supper boring, they never got girlfriends and played only games forever. I didn’t want to be with them, so I didn’t get along well with my classmates. but I met a lot of friends who were another classes and clubs. i decided to go in dancing club and rock music club. I tried to learn dancing and play guitar. But I couldn’t enjoy dancing and night clubs. maybe I was introverted, but I enjoyed drinking in night club and played guitar, And at the time I felt playing organ wasn’t useful. So I changed to play piano.

During period of university, I got a lot of part- time jobs because I didn’t like studying. Even if my parents gave enough allowance for me, but I wanted to get more job experiences and needed more money to buy clothes and hang out with friends.



untill I was in senior, I started to save money and I was worried about what did I do in the finture. It’s never too late to learn. So I decieded when I finshed my military serivce after I would go overseas to study English. During military service, I was a teach’ assistant in junior hight school, school looks like a small socity, I had learned a lot of experience there, such as making transcrpts, making all of schoo teacher’s salary, , buing bus tickets, supervision of student not moke and so on. Even though,it’s hard buy I got a unforgettable memory.

After I had finished military service for one year, i prepared to go to Vancouver.

I was expected with tension,now, i got a lot of memories in Vancouver, met a lot of awesome friends and I have seen a lot of unbelievable sights, I am grateful to my parents gave me this valuable opportunity to study aborad,I feel I am the happiest person in the world.