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Sarahkuang Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
My journal 2, please proofread!
Hi, teachers
I just found I put my first journal in a wrong forum. This is the right forum. It was written yesterday. Please tell me where is improper. Thanks!
May 26th, 2006
Weather: Mostly cloudy sky, shower
Today is Friday, with the Memorial Day coming on next Monday this will be a long weekend. Memorial Day is a day to remember those who gave their lives to US. A radio program, On Point, called people to talk how they remember their lost love ones. People around the States called. They talk about their sons, friends, brothers and sisters. Listening to those sad stories, there is only one feeling I have: US should withdraw the military from Iraq now. But from a political view withdraw isn’t a good ideal. I believe the only way Bush can do sent more troops to sort out the problem in Iraq. But when can it be solved is big question.
As the Holiday coming, while some of American families going to cemeteries most of American families are planning to hit on the road despite the high oil price. According the West NY AAA office’s speculation, there will be 1% more mobile traveling in the coming weekend than last Memorial Day. Actually American is adapting to the gas price. I remember last year when the gas price in West NY reached $ 1.5, people complained. Now if there was a gas station selling gas at $1.5, people would line up and thank God. Have you heard that high gas price has disparated impact on oil companies and others companies? High gas price stimulates more oil consumption, resulting in oil companies got high profits. But to others companies high gas price raise raw material cost and low their profits.
That is interesting. I am not an economist and that has been out of my interest. But I think short of energy resource is big problem and it needs everyone to take actions now to reduce our consumptive speed. Otherwise one day we will run out fossil fuel before we find new reliable energy resource.
I just found I put my first journal in a wrong forum. This is the right forum. It was written yesterday. Please tell me where is improper. Thanks!
May 26th, 2006
Weather: Mostly cloudy sky, shower
Today is Friday, with the Memorial Day coming on next Monday this will be a long weekend. Memorial Day is a day to remember those who gave their lives to US. A radio program, On Point, called people to talk how they remember their lost love ones. People around the States called. They talk about their sons, friends, brothers and sisters. Listening to those sad stories, there is only one feeling I have: US should withdraw the military from Iraq now. But from a political view withdraw isn’t a good ideal. I believe the only way Bush can do sent more troops to sort out the problem in Iraq. But when can it be solved is big question.
As the Holiday coming, while some of American families going to cemeteries most of American families are planning to hit on the road despite the high oil price. According the West NY AAA office’s speculation, there will be 1% more mobile traveling in the coming weekend than last Memorial Day. Actually American is adapting to the gas price. I remember last year when the gas price in West NY reached $ 1.5, people complained. Now if there was a gas station selling gas at $1.5, people would line up and thank God. Have you heard that high gas price has disparated impact on oil companies and others companies? High gas price stimulates more oil consumption, resulting in oil companies got high profits. But to others companies high gas price raise raw material cost and low their profits.
That is interesting. I am not an economist and that has been out of my interest. But I think short of energy resource is big problem and it needs everyone to take actions now to reduce our consumptive speed. Otherwise one day we will run out fossil fuel before we find new reliable energy resource.
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May 26 th , 2006 Weather: Mostly cloudy sky, shower Today is Friday. With Memorial Day coming on Monday, this will be a long holiday weekend. Memorial Day is a day for remembering those who gave their lives to the United States.
- May 26 th , 2006 Weather: Mostly cloudy sky, shower Today is Friday.
- With Memorial Day coming on Monday, this will be a long holiday weekend.
- Memorial Day is a day for remembering those who gave their lives to the United States.
- A radio program, "On Point", telephoned people to ask them about how they remember their lost loved ones.
- People around the States called in.
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May 26th, 2006
Weather: Mostly cloudy sky, shower
Today is Friday. With Memorial Day coming on Monday, this will be a long holiday weekend. Memorial Day is a day for remembering those who gave their lives to the United States. A radio program, "On Point", telephoned people to ask them abou
Weather: Mostly cloudy sky, shower
Today is Friday. With Memorial Day coming on Monday, this will be a long holiday weekend. Memorial Day is a day for remembering those who gave their lives to the United States. A radio program, "On Point", telephoned people to ask them abou
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