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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing
My introduction letter to my professor.
Dear Dr. Blank,
My name is Travis Daniell, I just moved to Plano from Tyler, Texas to attend Collin County. My major is Biology and my goal is to only be at Collin County Community College to get my basics out of the way and then move on to hopefully SMU or possibly even North Texas. After that I plan on attending UT Southwestern medical school for Anesthesiology. I’m an extremely hard worker and I am very motivated to make my goals in life come true.
I love to learn about Texas Government and the history of how it began so I am very excited to be a part of your class. There is nothing I love more than sports so athletics were always a huge part of school for me, but the one class I always looked forward to later in high school was Government. I see your class being a great way to learn so much more about how this great state work, and I am excited to see what I learn this semester in your class.
My name is Travis Daniell, I just moved to Plano from Tyler, Texas to attend Collin County. My major is Biology and my goal is to only be at Collin County Community College to get my basics out of the way and then move on to hopefully SMU or possibly even North Texas. After that I plan on attending UT Southwestern medical school for Anesthesiology. I’m an extremely hard worker and I am very motivated to make my goals in life come true.
I love to learn about Texas Government and the history of how it began so I am very excited to be a part of your class. There is nothing I love more than sports so athletics were always a huge part of school for me, but the one class I always looked forward to later in high school was Government. I see your class being a great way to learn so much more about how this great state work, and I am excited to see what I learn this semester in your class.
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Hi Anonymous, I just wanted to comment on your introduction letter. You might want to double check it for punctuation and grammar errors- there are a few. " This makes it sound like you aren't actually really interested in being at this particular school but just using it as a means to an end.
- Hi Anonymous, I just wanted to comment on your introduction letter.
- You might want to double check it for punctuation and grammar errors- there are a few.
- " This makes it sound like you aren't actually really interested in being at this particular school but just using it as a means to an end.
- It's fine to talk about your future plans to attend another school after you're finished at the community college, but maybe don't phrase it in the way that you did.
- One last thing, check your capitalization- "Texas Government" only "Texas" is capitalized.
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Hi Anonymous,
I just wanted to comment on your introduction letter. You might want to double check it for punctuation and grammar errors- there are a few. Also, you might not want to indicate to your professor that, "my goal is to only be at Collin County Community College to get my basics out of the way and then move on..." This makes it sound like you aren't actually really interested in bei
I just wanted to comment on your introduction letter. You might want to double check it for punctuation and grammar errors- there are a few. Also, you might not want to indicate to your professor that, "my goal is to only be at Collin County Community College to get my basics out of the way and then move on..." This makes it sound like you aren't actually really interested in bei
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