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The pie charts give information about 3 nutrients which are considered unhealthy for our body if we overeat them and meals which contain them.
Overall, snacks are high in added sugar while dinner meals are high in sodium. In addition, American eat breakfast meals which contain an similiar amount of sugar and fat.
It can be seen that in dinner dishes, there is more sodium with 43% in comparison with saturated fat with 37% and added sugar with 23%. Besides, at lunch, American consumes 29% of sodium which is higher than saturated with 26% and added sugar with 19%.
In contrast, in snacks, the percentage of added sugar is the highest about 42% followed by sodium with 29% and fat with 26%. Furthermore, Americans take in the proportion of sugar is equal to the saturated fat percentage at breakfast which is 16%. Compared, the amount of sodium in breakfast meals is 2% less than the other nutrients.
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0The pie charts give information about 3 three nutrients which are considered unhealthy for our body if we overeat them and the meals which contain them. (What are these three nutrients? How many meals are shown?)
Overall, snacks are high in added sugar while dinner
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