my ielts essay????

The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. there are obviously clues that the increasing of violence crimes were influenced by the violent movies. More and more teenagers imitate the violent movies to hurt the innocent without any guilty,from a real case, the virginia tech massacre was committed by a 23 years old college student who was influenced by a Korean violent movie “old-boy”.
It was ironic that we’v took the violent movies for granted. A fantastic art movie was no longer compare to a dull action movie with violence shots in today’s sociality. According to my point of view, violence and crimes should not be allowed in films and tv channels. Because they contains numerous of erotic, corrupt and provoking episode, which can bring negative influence to naive young people. Moreover, since young people are in the formative years, they are not mature enough. They always like imitating their idols, no matter right or wrong, which lead to the increasing of the juvenile delinquents. Thirdly, violence begets violence. Violent films and television can make people aggressive and cold-blooded, which enhance the violent crime in society. In a word, controlling the amount of violence in films and TV effectively can decrease the violent crimes in society and preserve social security.As far as I am concern, I strongly believe that the amount of violence in films and TV should be controlled.