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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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My Idol (This is a text of a speech. Please correct it for me. Thank you^^)

My Idol

Hello, everyone. My name is ( ) . My topic is “My Idol”.

My idol is a new young boy team in the realm of pop music in —“Lollipop”. The Lollipop has six members and they are all young handsome boys. That is not easy to join in the team. They all have specialties not only good looks.

The Lollipop’s first EP was published on January 2007 and had a circulation of more than one hundred thousand. Of course, I own the CD, too. After listening to the music, I could forget every sad thing. Their singing can inspire me soon.

I like two of them most, Fabien and Prince.

“Fabien” is the main singer of the team. He has a talent for music. He also can play the guitar and compose music. To be better, he started to learn dancing skills and make great strides these days.

Well. I like “Prince” most. He is the youngest one in the team and he is so personable that looks like a real prince. He is polite, smart and gets good grades in school. That’s the point I appreciate him.

The Lollipop can not only sing, but host a variety show. Though they have many fans in seconds, they still make modest remarks and work hard.

I really like the Lollipop. I hope that they can put their shoulder to the wheel in the future and publish more orphean albums.
  

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0You first mentioned "I like two of them most, Fabien and Prince." But later you said "I like “Prince” most." 02br
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