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Kunsusuki Posted 11 years ago
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My Ideal House?

Hi.
Could you please check this paragraph for me please?
One’s house is his castle, so is to be my ideal dwelling. It would take from the Japanese architecture its simple, large back garden, and its wooden, crimson ceiling. Its interior design would not submit to the ordinary, known traits, but it would rather mirror a rebellious , unique mind that seeks to shine.
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One’s house is his castle, and so will be my ideal dwelling. It will take from Japanese architecture its large, simple back garden and its crimson wood ceiling. Its interior design will not submit to the ordinary but rather mirror a unique rebellious mind that seeks to shine.

  • One’s house is his castle, and so will be my ideal dwelling.
  • It will take from Japanese architecture its large, simple back garden and its crimson wood ceiling.
  • Its interior design will not submit to the ordinary but rather mirror a unique rebellious mind that seeks to shine.
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One’s house is his castle, and so will be my ideal dwelling. It will take from Japanese architecture its large, simple back garden and its crimson wood ceiling. Its interior design will not submit to the ordinary but rather mirror a unique rebellious mind that seeks to shine.

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