I am spending my holiday this year in a big garden. It is a nice place. The weather is very beautiful. We are living in a small house in a small village.
In the foreground i can swing behind a big tree and there are a lot of flowers with different colors. And if I want to relax I can sit on the chair and read what I want to read. Also there is square pond beyond the big tree. The view is really attractive.
In the background there is a large yard and field. The yard has many cows and plants, it’s picturesque. Also the golf course occupies a large area from the garden. I can see a lot of people are playing golf and this is an interesting time. The scene is fantastic also with the mountain and the waterfall, so i can climb and swim and do whatever i like to do.
The garden is really like a paradise and I wish not to leave it. Maybe we will visit it again the next year. I advise from all to visit it also because it is a gold chance to live in this place
^ ^
i hope that anyone check my mistakes...
Asma
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Top answer
Hi, Ms. Strawberry, Your basic grammar seems okay to me. But somehow your feelings about the garden didn't come through very well.
— Julielai
Hi, Ms.
Strawberry, Your basic grammar seems okay to me.
But somehow your feelings about the garden didn't come through very well.
It may have something to do with your sentence patterns.
Just my 2 cents.
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0 Thanx alot for the notice julielai.. and i didn't understand this sentence (your feelings about the garden didn't come through very well. It may have something to do with your sentence patterns) .. did u mean that my description and my feelings about the garden were not enough.. 02br 02br 02br 00And thanx also to Ali and Abbie.. ^ ^ 02br 02br 00
0 Hi Miss S, 02br 02br 00"A precious opportunity" comes across better in English than "a gold chance", which doesn't really mean anything to us. We sometimes say " a golden opprtunity", but this often has more to do with financial things. 02br 02br 00I think what Julie 02br 00may be saying is, that although you tell us what you can see from th