My hobby
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A hobby is something that we do in our spare time for the sake of pleasure. Everyone has his own hobby. My hobby is photography. I spend most of my pocket money on camera and films. I take snapshots of different places, people, and sceneries. Taking snapshots of natural sceneries like setting sun and full moon have a great charm for me. These are my priceless treasures. Whenever I'm gloomy, I take out my albums and at once sweet association of those moments come back to my mind and causes smile on my face. I think photography is a very good and cheap hobby. I enjoy this very much.
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sundarnaz Please give me some feedback s and tell me how far was I successful in writing a correct paragraph. Please give me some feedback and tell me how successful I was at writing a correct paragraph. sundarnaz Everyone has his own hobby.
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- sundarnaz Everyone has his own hobby.
- Everyone has their own hobby.
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0sundarnazI spend most of my pocket money on camera and films.
The highlighted part is singular. Do you mean one camera in particular? You should explain because it's not clear.
sundarnazand sceneries.
and scenery. or and sc
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