MY HERO

I think lots of students like the pop singer named Jay. I also like him very much. When he released his first, I started to buy it album. I never miss any of his albums.

Do you know as a boy, Jay was called Dull which means stupid. His mother, Keh Hui Mei, noticed that the quiet, boy seemed to dance whenever he heard western pop music which she used to listen. Later his mother sent him to a piano school when he was four years old. When he has grown up, he can play the piano very well. I learnt to play the piano from 7 to 13 years old. I often feel bored when I practice the piano. But Jay was always crazy about playing the piano. I think he really like music. I admire him very much, and I call him my “hero’’.

I admire Jay. The real reason is when the others all denied him, he never gives up. He tried his best to change his life. I think it is good for everybody. I hope that everyone can learn from him… try their best in everything they do. Then I think we will achieve our goals in life.

Please help me correct them, thanks.