my heart feels for u

Not a poem; just a plaint.

To me, I think it's a translation of the ancient poem of a style influenced by Chinese.It's really written in Han languague,and it's spoken instantly in a suitable situation. When people are sensible with the beauty of something or with the sentiment of someone,they speak it at once. The poem contains some oriental colour.There is a contradiction of the second line and the third line. The author w

PhuongninhbaoTo me, I think it's a translation of the ancient poem of a style influenced by Chinese.It's really written in Han languague,and it's spoken instantly in a suitable situation.

Don't think so, Phuong. Ancient Chinese poetry is known for its intricacy. Anon's style is far from intricate; in fact, quite the opposite.

Agreed. That was not much of a poem, more like a plaint like Mister Micawber said, and certainly not written in the style of Han poems as alleged.

I agree with you but I have a little confuse.It's a Nom poem, a style of Duong rule poem written with the sign of Han language.The translation made it easy to understand. Do you know this paralell sentence?:

First look made a town collapse

Another look made a nation collapse.

It's written in Han language. And here is a famous poem written by Ho xuan Huong;

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