My first poem in English ...

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Hi all, I am Sara…. I usually write poetry in another language … other than English … This is my first poem in English … I wrote it just today 5/3/2007 …. Please have a look and feed me back  Your comments are highly appreciated I love you all …….&&&&&&&&&&&I am missing you ….. I really do …. Oh baby oh …….come and hug me……... forever …… endless hug ….. I want to live in your bosom ….my whole life …………..I am missing you …..I want to be with you …….. only you …near to you …….. dear to you …In your kind eyes…………I see the happiness …….I feel the love ……I discover that ….life is more valuable with a soul mate ….. I am missing you Don't you miss my voice?my songs on the dark night?my little warm "hands" ……….I am missing all of you ………... Oh baby ……I am looking through the window ….. all the time …..with a dream to see your shadow …….carrying red rose to me……. filling my life with loud lovely laughs….I will never be hopeless …… &&&&&&&&&&&

Pucca · Accepted Answer

Ok..here is the comment you so much wished!:)

Well, seems quite sad! ..but it's beautiful if it was you who wrote it;) (I'm awful writing poem, well, I don't know how to write them!
I liked this sentence.." life is more valuable with a soul mate":)

Princess Sara · Answer

Dear Pucca

nice to see your name here

thank you for your reply, it means so much for me.... I will always remeber that you were the first one who reply on my first peom here

ummmmmmm yes I wrote it and I know it is a little bit sad ..... I am missing somone it should be sad

thank you again and again my friend ....

Pucca · Answer

I'm honoured! wow..seems that I'll always be remember as "the first one who wrote a comment in you first poem":)

Well, you are right! It should be sad..but maybe you can write how beautiful it was being near him! That would make it..I don't know, something special!:D

Princess Sara · Answer

Hi again Pucca

you said "It should be sad..but maybe you can write how beautiful it was being near him!"

dear just let him come back to me and I will write how beautiful it was being nera him

looool

this is a promise

Anonymous · Answer

Shalom shalom or salam salam to the princess of arabia!

very nice cute song!

what can i say/what can i tell

you have the style/like real princess

your words can touch in any heart/melt any frozen man lol

like path who show the way to your own heart ;D

Anonymous · Answer

by the way,the message was from unknown

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Idan>I see Oman I see UAE i see Princess and i don't see sinbad!

Neversaynever · Answer

It is the reflection of the emotions in a very simple way.. It is written to be understood.. I mean emotions expressed in an easiest way, and I liked it.. no need to be complicated

(I couldn't express what I mean well, but.. anyway..

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I appreciate your first attempt to write a poem in English.. You should continue

Cheers,,,

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