My first poem in 20 minutes. Check! Check! Check!

0 00Suddenly, an urge to make a poem rush into my mind.02br
00So after 20 minutes, below is the result. 02br
00The poem's meanings? Not sure even myself. 02br
00But please do check on my grammars, vocab, the arragement 02br
00and anything that you can comment on.02br
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00It was dark02br
00 really dark.02br
00 He could't see02br
00 where he should be.02br
00He was late02br
00but it was fate.02br
00 That brings hope02br
00 for his humble abode02br
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00 It was bright02br
00 full of light.02br
00 She has seen02br
00 where she should've been02br
00 She was early02br
00 but so sorry02br
00 She's not the one02br
00 thus her hope was gone.02br
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