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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
my firs peom
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00 I don't know the rules of writing peoms, but I just wrote down what I felt about. I wish I could find notes about my first peom. 02 br
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01 b 00 In the course of time, I haven't seen 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 A beam as in your smile, I haven't felt 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 As cruel as your eyes, I haven't loved 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 A woman as you in my whole life. 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 But when the cross road appears, 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 The grief gets near. The sorrow knocks 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 On door and settles in the depth of my soul. 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 And a storm becomes in my mind when 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 You are out of my side. From that time, 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 The sun's ray has never shone, the west wind 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 Has never blown, and the red rose has never grown. 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 But all I know my heart will never bow. 02 b 0-
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00 I don't know the rules of writing peoms, but I just wrote down what I felt about. I wish I could find notes about my first peom. 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 In the course of time, I haven't seen 02 b 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 A beam as in your smile, I haven't felt 02 b 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 As cruel as your eyes, I haven't loved 02 b 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 A woman as you in my whole life. 02 b 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 But when the cross road appears, 02 b 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 The grief gets near. The sorrow knocks 02 b 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 On door and settles in the depth of my soul. 02 b 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 And a storm becomes in my mind when 02 b 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 You are out of my side. From that time, 02 b 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 The sun's ray has never shone, the west wind 02 b 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 Has never blown, and the red rose has never grown. 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 But all I know my heart will never bow. 02 b 0-
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0 Hi, i must say that it is a really nice and meaningfull peom, if some one go on deep of this peom, I like it alot. 0-
- 0 Hi, i must say that it is a really nice and meaningfull peom, if some one go on deep of this peom, I like it alot.
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0 Hi, i must say that it is a really nice and meaningfull peom, if some one go on deep of this peom, I like it alot. best of luck!! 0-
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Hello!
This is Sakena from Kabul Afghanistan, hope you are fine and doing well.
Feel well and proud, yor peom is realy realy nice and meanfull, try to follow up this way and improver your knowledge in
wish you best of health and luck
Sakena
This is Sakena from Kabul Afghanistan, hope you are fine and doing well.
Feel well and proud, yor peom is realy realy nice and meanfull, try to follow up this way and improver your knowledge in
wish you best of health and luck
Sakena
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ACCORDING TO ME YOUR POEM IS THE BEST
IN THIS EXTRAT YOU TALKING ABOUT YOUR PERSONAL LIFE
AN ANGLE WHO ENTER INTO UR LIFE
UR WORLD HAS BEN CHANGED N HER PRESENCE
BUT WHEN SHE WENT AWAY FROM U
UR LIFE HAS BECAME LIKE A DUMB.
IN THIS EXTRAT YOU TALKING ABOUT YOUR PERSONAL LIFE
AN ANGLE WHO ENTER INTO UR LIFE
UR WORLD HAS BEN CHANGED N HER PRESENCE
BUT WHEN SHE WENT AWAY FROM U
UR LIFE HAS BECAME LIKE A DUMB.
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