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4. List and explain why these courses had to be dropped/repeated/withdrawn:
HIS 1053 US History Civil War to Present - Withdraw - Fall 2005
History is not one of my strength in academia and requires more time from me, so, I figured at that moment my course load, living conditions, and financial circumstance were indecorous, thus, withdrawing from this course was the proper decision for me.

MAT 1214 Calculus I - Withdrawn - Spring 2005
I did not understand the professor english either in lecture or one on one conversation. Thus, lead me to believe that not having a good grasp on what seem to be a crucial subject since at that time, my major was chemistry for which I needed to know the calculus I like the back of my hand for thermodynamics, physical chemistry, and instrumental analysis.
BIO 3433 Neurobiology - Withdrawn - Fall 2007
I took neurobiology simply because I am captivated by the most complex organ of the body "The Brain." Such factors as work schedule, financial need, and grades of other course, I had to pick the least important course to my major at that time, which is neurology, ironically my favorite course.
5. What do you like or dislike most about the area you are from (hometown)?
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Hands down the most likeable part of my hometown is the fact that my family lives there. Next up on my adoring list is ironically the most dislike as well considering the fact that serenity and peace that exist in my hometown is delusional given the egocentric belief that as long as serenity and peace is in the immediate environment than such matters as poverty and hardship that is occurring in rest of America as well as globally is frugal.
6. Please describe what you would see as the "ideal" practice for you. (where, type of practice --- clinic, hospital, both, speciality, who would be your patients, etc.)
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Right now, my intention are not be a primary doctor rather I want to specialize in whatever is scarce the society, but, nevertheless, I also want to be able to provide a large range of services including primary care to my fellow human beings. My ideal practice is located in Africa or any other third world country in need of a FREE hospital. Every weekend I, along with my colleague would sprinkle out the small villages and rural areas close to the location of the hospital to supply our services to whose who cannot make it to the hospital due to lack of transportation. Majority of the patients are people who are poverty stricken and are unable to get the mandatory care for his/her illness.
7. Please tell us about your favorite recreational/leisure activities?
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My favorite recreational/leisure activity is playing basketball. The beauty of the game is only grasp when one starts to consider factors that to a win a pick up game requires teamwork and most times with strangers. Personally, what amazes me is how one can contribute without actually scoring a basket either by hustling, defending, or even simply pointing out for the blind spot defender. The game of basketball is like chess, for every action there is a reaction, and what it boils down is the fact how can you use your god given ability whether physically or mentally to out smart your opponent as a individual and more important, collectively as a team.
  

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Anon: I have made a few suggestions. The text does need a bit more work for comprehensibility. Regards, A- s Anonymous 4.

  • Anon: I have made a few suggestions.
  • The text does need a bit more work for comprehensibility.
  • Regards, A- s Anonymous 4.
  • List and explain why these courses had to be dropped/repeated/withdrawn: HIS 1053 US History Civil War to Present - Withdraw - Fall 2005 History is not one of my strength s in academia and requires more time from me than other courses , so, I figured at that moment my course load, living conditions, and financial circumstance s were indecorous (indecorous is not really appropriate here) , thus, withdrawing from this course was the proper decision for me.
  • MAT 1214 Calculus I - Withdrawn - Spring 2005 I did not understand the professor 's E nglish either in lecture or one - on - one conversation.
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Anon:
I have made a few suggestions. The text does need a bit more work for comprehensibility.

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