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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Hi, I want to comment my feedback to a post, so kindly help me to review my grammar in the below writing. Thank you.

First of all, thanks for the opportunity to read this. Basically, it’s a great story and the movie deals with how it is so difficult to make a Singaporean Tamil film. I’m particularly impressed with the ‘slow reveal’ in the story. Instead of giving the audience all the facts from the outset. My score 7/10 just for the script.


However, I have a few suggestions that will help even further strengthen this in to a quality movie as an audience. A good script is not enough, you must also give equal attention to the strong cast (that is popular with the younger generation) and voice over. Another issue plaguing the local Tamil film industry is the lack of promotion. It’s good to have an official trailer coming out as early as a year before it would help sustained the excitement until the day of its release.
  

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Hi, I want to comment on my feedback to a post, so kindly help me to review my grammar in the below writing below . Thank you. ) read this.

  • Hi, I want to comment on my feedback to a post, so kindly help me to review my grammar in the below writing below .
  • Thank you.
  • ) read this.
  • Basically, it’s a great story .
  • T he movie exposes / tells us / lets us see deals with how difficult it is so difficult to make a Singaporean Tamil film.
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Hi, I want to comment on my feedback to a post, so kindly help me to review my grammar in the below writing below. Thank you.

First of all, thanks for the opportunity to write (?) read this. Basically, it’s a great story

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