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Zunayeed Posted 14 years ago
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My favorite person
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Favorite person
My favorite person is my father who always cares me. Without my father’s inspiration I could never handle difficult situations. When I become sad, he encourages me most. For example, last night I was very depress about my upcoming results. He said,” hey, Young man don’t be sad, have belief in yourself.” On the other hand, he is very simple. He prefers simple living and deep thinking. He believes in hard working. As a whole, he is a great inspiration for me.
Favorite person
My favorite person is my father who always cares me. Without my father’s inspiration I could never handle difficult situations. When I become sad, he encourages me most. For example, last night I was very depress about my upcoming results. He said,” hey, Young man don’t be sad, have belief in yourself.” On the other hand, he is very simple. He prefers simple living and deep thinking. He believes in hard working. As a whole, he is a great inspiration for me.
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My favorite person is my father who always cares for me. Without my father’s inspiration I could would never be able to handle difficult situations. When I become sad, he encourages me most.
- My favorite person is my father who always cares for me.
- Without my father’s inspiration I could would never be able to handle difficult situations.
- When I become sad, he encourages me most.
- For example, last night I was very depress ed about my upcoming results .
- ” On the other hand, he is very simple.
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My favorite person is my father who always cares for me. Without my father’s inspiration I could would never be able to handle difficult situations. When I become sad, he encourages me most. For example, last night I was very depress
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Hi sorry, it should read:
For example, last night I was very depressed about my upcoming results, so he said,” Hey, young man, don’t be sad, have faith in yourself.”
I added 'so' in this response.
For example, last night I was very depressed about my upcoming results, so he said,” Hey, young man, don’t be sad, have faith in yourself.”
I added 'so' in this response.
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Regarding could/would, I am sure there is a rule regarding when to use could and would, but to me as a native English speaker, 'could' sounds wrong.
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In the name of ALLAH my favorite personality is MUHAMMAD S.A.W.W...
he is sincere and honest person. pepol were call apellation ameen and sadiq. muslim bow before one *** we should obey of ALLAH
he is sincere and honest person. pepol were call apellation ameen and sadiq. muslim bow before one *** we should obey of ALLAH
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My favorite personality: THE PERSONALITY OF PROPHET MUHAMMAD
The Personality of the Prophet Muhammad
The Prophet Muhammad was known for good character throughout his life. He was known as: "The Honest" long before he received the message of Islam.
He was handsome, of medium height, very active, walked rapidly which forced his companions to race to keep up with him. People reported see
The Personality of the Prophet Muhammad
The Prophet Muhammad was known for good character throughout his life. He was known as: "The Honest" long before he received the message of Islam.
He was handsome, of medium height, very active, walked rapidly which forced his companions to race to keep up with him. People reported see
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