My father

My father’s name is Poh Tik Wei. He is 38 years old. He is a businessman. He has a big belly, but he is tall and strong. His hobby is playing volleyball. He looks very cool and handsome when he is talking about business. He is a very kind-hearted person. He likes helping people. When he sees someone in troubles, he will try his best to help him.

My father likes reading books very much. He says a good book is one’s best friend. He reads after work every day. Sometimes he plays games with me. We are very happy. I like him very much because my father is not only my father, but also my good friend.

He is a good father. I love him very much. He is the best father in the world. My dear friends, do you have a good father, too?

Please help me correct them, thanks.