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Darkmaster Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
My essay about robbery, need feedback.
How to Avoid Bandits
One of the most difficult problems of our society is robbery, especially on the street. The rate of robbery on city street is gradually increasing. Consequently, travelers must learn how to avoid being robbed.If one does not want to be robbed, he or she should not carry much money or valuable jewelry when travelling. Even an empty handbag with luxurious appearance may still be the target of bandits, because they do not know how much money there is in it. Moreover, the best way of self-protecting from robbers is avoiding lonely spots. The bandits cannot do anything when there are many people around them. Besides, we should find the safest ways to walk on, avoiding all the streets where robbery often happens. In conclusion, it is very difficult for one to be robbed if he or she travels on the street with a high caution.
One of the most difficult problems of our society is robbery, especially on the street. The rate of robbery on city street is gradually increasing. Consequently, travelers must learn how to avoid being robbed.If one does not want to be robbed, he or she should not carry much money or valuable jewelry when travelling. Even an empty handbag with luxurious appearance may still be the target of bandits, because they do not know how much money there is in it. Moreover, the best way of self-protecting from robbers is avoiding lonely spots. The bandits cannot do anything when there are many people around them. Besides, we should find the safest ways to walk on, avoiding all the streets where robbery often happens. In conclusion, it is very difficult for one to be robbed if he or she travels on the street with a high caution.
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Hi Darkmaster, Bandit is an odd term. You certainly aren't expecting a man in a mask on horseback, coming to take your purse? These are just my two cents.
- Hi Darkmaster, Bandit is an odd term.
- You certainly aren't expecting a man in a mask on horseback, coming to take your purse?
- These are just my two cents.
- If one does not want to be robbed, he or she should not carry much money or valuable jewelry (you don't carry jewelry) when travelling.
- ) luxurious appearance may still be the target of bandits, because they do not know how much money there (there doesn't belong here) is in it.
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Hi Darkmaster,
Bandit is an odd term. You certainly aren't expecting a man in a mask on horseback, coming to take your purse?
Bandit is an odd term. You certainly aren't expecting a man in a mask on horseback, coming to take your purse?
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Hi,julielai
I'm sorry if this is a silly question, but what did you want to say about the bold words? Did you mean that they're wrong?
If so, please explain, and It 'll be very kind of you to help me correct it.
Thanks for your feedback.
Kind regards,
KhaiMinh
I'm sorry if this is a silly question, but what did you want to say about the bold words? Did you mean that they're wrong?
If so, please explain, and It 'll be very kind of you to help me correct it.
Thanks for your feedback.
Kind regards,
KhaiMinh
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