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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

my essay

hello.. anybody help me to write my essay about the traffic problems here is the sentece i have to input in the supporting of paragraph essay..
1. building more rapid transit systems between cities and suburbs
- get to destinations quickly and safely
- more commuters’ cars at home
- reduce the numbers of cars on the streets
- no traffic jams

2. prefer getting on excellent public transports rather than driving cars
- For example, excellent railway lines in Japan
- dependable subway system connecting Tokyo and Osaka

3. building car pools
- the definition of car pools
- for example, workers from Boston, Manhattan, and LA form one car pool
- take turns driving
- fewer traffic jams and accidents
- improving public transportation system
- taking buses and street cars to cities/works
- avoid commuter rush
- get to destinations and return home more quickly

please help me.. just for the supporting paragraph and the conclution .. thanks
  

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Hi, We won't write your sentences for you. , we will check your work for you. Did you write this plan, or did someone else, like your teacher, give it to you?

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Hi,

We won't write your sentences for you. But if you try., we will check your work for you.

Did you write this plan, or did someone else, like your teacher, give it to you?

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