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Linh do Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
My english is too weak. Please help me check this paragraph !
Whenever something occupied a huge part of you that gone, you will feel a immense blank in your soul. Something was daily routine in your life that you thought it's never change. And suddenly, in one day, it's in time to go, forever.
I never be a brave man. And the worse thing, I'm weakness. I never enough braveness to talk whatever things face to face. I hide all my emotions inside and replace that with a fake expression. It's worse, but that is my character, I'm introvert.
It was the reason that everybody thought me emotionless. Everyone left me behind and everyone didn't feel anything. I did. May be someone laugh at me, but I felt a pain in the heart. Then a black hole appeared in my heart, gradually, have been attracting everything and left the space. I felt emptinless. I just standing there, look forward, towards something step by step gone away from me and never meet again. Despite want to speak, I weren't able to speak any words.
I never be a brave man. And the worse thing, I'm weakness. I never enough braveness to talk whatever things face to face. I hide all my emotions inside and replace that with a fake expression. It's worse, but that is my character, I'm introvert.
It was the reason that everybody thought me emotionless. Everyone left me behind and everyone didn't feel anything. I did. May be someone laugh at me, but I felt a pain in the heart. Then a black hole appeared in my heart, gradually, have been attracting everything and left the space. I felt emptinless. I just standing there, look forward, towards something step by step gone away from me and never meet again. Despite want to speak, I weren't able to speak any words.
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htm You are trying to write at a level of English that is far above your ability. Go one step at a time. Start with simple, sentences.
- htm You are trying to write at a level of English that is far above your ability.
- Go one step at a time.
- Start with simple, sentences.
- Then make progress to more complicated sentences.
- linh do Whenever something occupied a huge part of you and is now gone, I don't understand.
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