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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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My commas?

hi, i need help with this sentence:

"By the way my sister has no idea I’m writing this to you and I’d like to keep it that way if you don't mind"

i'm not sure if i should put commas, or where i should put commas

and i'm also not sure if the part "if you don't mind" sounds too pushy to the reader

thank you
  

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Hi, hi, i need help with this sentence: "By the way my sister has no idea I’m writing this to you and I’d like to keep it that way if you don't mind" i'm not sure if i should put commas, or where i should put commas I'd put commas here. "By the way , my sister has no idea I’m writing this to you , and I’d like to keep it that way if you don't mind . " and i'm also not sure if the part "if you don't mind" sounds too pushy to the reader Seems OK to me.

— Clive

  • Hi, hi, i need help with this sentence: "By the way my sister has no idea I’m writing this to you and I’d like to keep it that way if you don't mind" i'm not sure if i should put commas, or where i should put commas I'd put commas here.
  • "By the way , my sister has no idea I’m writing this to you , and I’d like to keep it that way if you don't mind .
  • " and i'm also not sure if the part "if you don't mind" sounds too pushy to the reader Seems OK to me.
  • thank you Why do you think capital letters are important for the person you are writing to, but not when you are writing to us?
  • Clive
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Hi,

hi, i need help with this sentence:

"By the way my sister has no idea I’m writing this to you and I’d like to keep it that way if you don't mind"

i'm not sure if i should put commas, or where i should put commas

I'd put commas here.

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