My c1 essay
Public transport versus road building:
It is well known that as cities grow up and become bigger they need more ways to comunicate people cause the distances are longer.Due to this, it is truly necessary increase the Networking means in such cities.
On the other side, the more roads are built the more nature is affected.That is why switching to public transport could be a goodchoice.
In this essay ill try to adress the subject and ill look the advantages and drawbacks of each choice.
All over the world population it’s gettinglarger as time goes by and therefore,there isan incredible need of comunication between many places.As a matter of fact , it is becoming a major problem to connect people by developing new highways due to the spends and environmental damage.
As a result , cities are becoming increasingly a source of contamination dueto the incredible levels of gases emitted to atmosphere.Futhermore , nature is being unfortunatelly affected and the damage produced is awful.Because of that , society should make an responsable use of car and increase the use of public transports.
In conclusión, it is necesary weigh up advantages as well as backwards and try to build responsibly and focus on respect the enviroment .Appart of this increase the use of public transport and push people to switch to it.
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I'd like to add that I've realized too probably big mistakes in my essay problem connecting people focus on respecting the environment I always get confused with gerunds after verbs.
- I'd like to add that I've realized too probably big mistakes in my essay problem connecting people focus on respecting the environment I always get confused with gerunds after verbs.
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I'd like to add that I've realized too probably big mistakes in my essay
problem connecting people
focus on respecting the environment
I always get confused with gerunds after verbs.
0I have highlighted the text that contains errors.
It is well known that as cities grow up and become bigger they need more ways to comunicate people cause the distances are longer.Due to this, it is truly necessary increase the
00Totally indeed,here is my doubt
On the other side, the more roads (missing word) are
The yellow one and missing word.
0Thanks a lot,I've got to say that this site has been the most useful I've ever visited for long time.So it's got no sense to use the present in (the more.....the more)
Thanks a lot
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