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Yohooo8 Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
My blog entry
0 Hi, can someone look up my blog writing for me? i have been living in U.S 02 br
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00 I started to write blog entry as someone recommanded last week. Can someone tell me what is wrong with my writing? 02 br
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00 I started my own registered business “SouthStar Computers” 2 years ago with tutoring, and onsite support services. I am not that aggressive on my business now as half years ago when i didn’t started my graduate program. But still, the business is still running almost fine due to the small amount of the work, like few of constantly tutoring services and support services. 02 br
00 The big news for today is a big client ” CompuUSA” i have contracted few jobs before called today and offering me to be their member of ” National Authorized Service Center". They said i was done a good job when i contracted their client a year ago, and my business is selected as a candidate to them. If I agree, they’ll sign the contract with me right a way. This is something i really wanted a year ago! Kidding me? It’s not contracting job , it’s an offical service provider contract!!! and it’s “CompuUSA", It’s such a big apple, tell me any reasons that i should not take the contract? But can I? I am thinking about my situation right now, I have a 8 hours of regular job, and the graduate schoolwork , also the ongoing tutoring service. How do i balance them in my current life if i accept the contract from CompuUSA. Will i be able to still keep my job? or i should completely quit my regular job and focus on my own business? or should i just hire someone to work for my business? My best choice is to quit my job and work hard on my business since it’s such a good start up opportunity, but what is my concerns now? what stops me on this? like Lei told me once, ” ya? what stops you doing it?". I am asking these questions over and over again today, maybe i don’t want to let it go any of them. I don’t know, i really don’t… 0-
00 for more than 10 years already, however, i am still not confident in writing in English. 02 br
00 I started to write blog entry as someone recommanded last week. Can someone tell me what is wrong with my writing? 02 br
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00 6-5-05 02 br
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00 I started my own registered business “SouthStar Computers” 2 years ago with tutoring, and onsite support services. I am not that aggressive on my business now as half years ago when i didn’t started my graduate program. But still, the business is still running almost fine due to the small amount of the work, like few of constantly tutoring services and support services. 02 br
00 The big news for today is a big client ” CompuUSA” i have contracted few jobs before called today and offering me to be their member of ” National Authorized Service Center". They said i was done a good job when i contracted their client a year ago, and my business is selected as a candidate to them. If I agree, they’ll sign the contract with me right a way. This is something i really wanted a year ago! Kidding me? It’s not contracting job , it’s an offical service provider contract!!! and it’s “CompuUSA", It’s such a big apple, tell me any reasons that i should not take the contract? But can I? I am thinking about my situation right now, I have a 8 hours of regular job, and the graduate schoolwork , also the ongoing tutoring service. How do i balance them in my current life if i accept the contract from CompuUSA. Will i be able to still keep my job? or i should completely quit my regular job and focus on my own business? or should i just hire someone to work for my business? My best choice is to quit my job and work hard on my business since it’s such a good start up opportunity, but what is my concerns now? what stops me on this? like Lei told me once, ” ya? what stops you doing it?". I am asking these questions over and over again today, maybe i don’t want to let it go any of them. I don’t know, i really don’t… 0-
Top answer
0 Hi Yohooo, 02 br 02 br 00 The whole point of blogging is to write in your own words-- a blog is your internet diary. I could correct some of your grammar and punctuation, of course, but then it would no longer be your personal communication with the internet world. 02 br 02 br 00 What you have written is well-told and very interesting-- your style is quite personable-- so just keep blogging and let your English writing improve naturally as your blog grows.
- 0 Hi Yohooo, 02 br 02 br 00 The whole point of blogging is to write in your own words-- a blog is your internet diary.
- I could correct some of your grammar and punctuation, of course, but then it would no longer be your personal communication with the internet world.
- 02 br 02 br 00 What you have written is well-told and very interesting-- your style is quite personable-- so just keep blogging and let your English writing improve naturally as your blog grows.
- Then it will be the real 'you'!
- 02 br 02 br 00 Good luck, 02 br 02 br 00 MM 0-
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0 Hi Yohooo, 02 br
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00 The whole point of blogging is to write in your own words-- a blog is your internet diary. I could correct some of your grammar and punctuation, of course, but then it would no longer be your personal communication with the internet world. 02 br
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00 What you have written is well-told and very interesting-- your style is quite per
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00 The whole point of blogging is to write in your own words-- a blog is your internet diary. I could correct some of your grammar and punctuation, of course, but then it would no longer be your personal communication with the internet world. 02 br
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00 What you have written is well-told and very interesting-- your style is quite per
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