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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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My 2 body paragraphs for my essay. Essay Compare and contrast. Help with grammar and re wording and punctunction

High school teachers and college professors have very little in common and they



are different in many ways. In my experiences through high school and college I have



notice many similarities and differences between my high school teacher and college



professor. The similarities are common grading test, being around students all day, and



teaching students. There are many differences between teachers and professors. One



example would be teachers are trained in teaching methods to help make them better



teachers. Professors are experts in their particular areas of study. Another example is



teachers often remind students about missing assignments, due dates, and incomplete



work. Professors expect students to follow the course syllabus. Unlike high school



teachers professors treat students as adults and have high expectation for their students



which shapes and influence their behavior.



High school and college classes have few similarities but many differences.



Some of the similarities are high school and college classes both give tests, and have



students in the class they have to teach. There are many differences between a high



school class and a college class. One difference is high school students have a full day of



classes. In college students may only have one class per day or long breaks between your



classes. Another difference is high school is twenty six weeks long with the same classes



for both semesters. College classes are fourteen weeks then it’s a new semester and



students can take new classes. When I was a student in high school I had no choice of



when I wanted to attend class and attendance was mandatory now that I’m in college I



can pick the time I want to go to class and attendance but attendance is still necessary to



pass the course. College makes students realize that they have to be responsible in order



to be successful.
  

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I have made some suggestions and highlighted words which have grammatical errors. I have put question marks where the sentence subject does not match the verb, or where the text does not make much sense. High school teachers and college professors have very little in common (do you really want to say this?

  • I have made some suggestions and highlighted words which have grammatical errors.
  • I have put question marks where the sentence subject does not match the verb, or where the text does not make much sense.
  • High school teachers and college professors have very little in common (do you really want to say this?
  • It implies that they don't have any of the same interests.
  • An example of people that have little in common are atheistic communists and Christian fundamentalists in the political right wing.
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I have made some suggestions and highlighted words which have grammatical errors.
I have put question marks where the sentence subject does not match the verb, or where the text does not make much sense.

High school teachers and college professors have very little in common (do you really want to say this? It implies that they don't have any of the same interests. An example of p

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