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Radrook Posted 21 years ago

My!

My, how the high have fallen and the low have risen to new heights!
My, how the rain has vanished and mosquitoes revel in their bites.
My, how the virgin daughters no longer shimmer as they should.
My, my how what we thought sacred is no longer any good!

My, how the man palavers about mighty deeds done one time.
My, how the future mocks him revealing only the endless night.
My, how the bristling bushes are no longer for his play.
My, how short the distance, just an instant, from the darkness to the day.
  

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Is this about Hurricane Katrina?

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Is this about Hurricane Katrina?
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Thanks for the feedback.
No, I wasn't thinking about Katrina.
It is more an existential commentary on the human condition.
But it is relevant to such disasters.
Here is an explanation:

My, how the high have fallen and the low have risen to new heights!

Nothing is assured. One moment we are on top and the next we are at the bottom. An example of this is what happen
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"Virgin daughters", "endless night": echoes of Blake, maybe?

MrP
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Thanx for the feedback.

Echos Blake in which of his poems?
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RadrookMy, how the virgin daughters no longer shimmer as they should.

It's sad. I don't like how the previous generation treats virgins as losers yet mocks those teenagers who have lost their virginity despite they were the one who planted that mindset.

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