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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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(Multiple Commas) Does this seem correct?
Hi,
I'm writing a description of an event, and was wondering if a sentence I have written would make sense to the reader.Can you give me your perspectives please?
The problem is marked by the red line, where I feel the sentence needs to be "broken up" from the preceeding list.
"With discussions on branch relocation, a close look at employee benefits, and profit and loss ratios, participants will have the chance to share a diversity of perspectives on how to..."
Many thanks.
I'm writing a description of an event, and was wondering if a sentence I have written would make sense to the reader.Can you give me your perspectives please?
The problem is marked by the red line, where I feel the sentence needs to be "broken up" from the preceeding list.
"With discussions on branch relocation, a close look at employee benefits, and profit and loss ratios, participants will have the chance to share a diversity of perspectives on how to..."
Many thanks.
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Can you give me your perspectives please? The problem is marked by the red line, where I feel the sentence needs to be "broken up" from the preceeding list. " The comma makes the sentence fine.
- Can you give me your perspectives please?
- The problem is marked by the red line, where I feel the sentence needs to be "broken up" from the preceeding list.
- " The comma makes the sentence fine.
- However, for parallelism,you need to add what I've marked in pink because of what I've marked in bold.
- Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,
I'm writing a description of an event, and was wondering if a sentence I have written would make sense to the reader.Can you give me your perspectives please?
The problem is marked by the red line, where I feel the sentence needs to be "broken up" from the preceeding list.
"With discussions on branch relocation, a close look at employee ben
I'm writing a description of an event, and was wondering if a sentence I have written would make sense to the reader.Can you give me your perspectives please?
The problem is marked by the red line, where I feel the sentence needs to be "broken up" from the preceeding list.
"With discussions on branch relocation, a close look at employee ben
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