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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
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I saw this movie once in a theater and another time on rental. As much as I agree with the inexperienced acting from most of the cast, I can't say that it was poor protrayal of what certain minorities in the US have to go through on a daily basis. I am myself a minority, have been through variations of what happened to each of the protagonists in the movie. Movies in general can either stimulate our creative minds by having us imagine a world beyond what is the norm to our own lives, or sometimes it'll make us feel like viewing a film of our own lives, because it may have happened to our particular self.
So, it's hard to just say that this movie wasn't good or the acting had been sub-par, because have you really experienced or even know that their are parts of America like the one in this movie?
Maybe his emotionless and stoic demeanor was because of his inexperienced acting or maybe it was also because of how nervous he felt working w/ a big name actor or it could've been the anxiety of living in a community surrounded by negativity and needing to deal with it not by choice, but by fate.
I saw this movie once in a theater and another time on rental. As much as I agree with the inexperienced acting from most of the cast, I can't say that it was poor protrayal of what certain minorities in the US have to go through on a daily basis. I am myself a minority, have been through variations of what happened to each of the protagonists in the movie. Movies in general can either stimulate our creative minds by having us imagine a world beyond what is the norm to our own lives, or sometimes it'll make us feel like viewing a film of our own lives, because it may have happened to our particular self.
So, it's hard to just say that this movie wasn't good or the acting had been sub-par, because have you really experienced or even know that their are parts of America like the one in this movie?
Maybe his emotionless and stoic demeanor was because of his inexperienced acting or maybe it was also because of how nervous he felt working w/ a big name actor or it could've been the anxiety of living in a community surrounded by negativity and needing to deal with it not by choice, but by fate.
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or sometimes it'll make us feel like viewing a film of our own lives (like this film was a reminder of my own life), because it was... or even know that there are... how nervous he felt working with a big name actor...
- or sometimes it'll make us feel like viewing a film of our own lives (like this film was a reminder of my own life), because it was...
- or even know that there are...
- how nervous he felt working with a big name actor...
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Based on my understanding of what you wrote - you're saying that most of the cast were not professional actors, but that this didn't ruin the film (?) - this is how I personally would edit some sections of it for grammar only (I like the overall wording and tone of it as is):
...Even though I was bothered some by the inexperienced acting from most of the cast...I am myself a minority, and
...Even though I was bothered some by the inexperienced acting from most of the cast...I am myself a minority, and
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AnonymousBased on my understanding of what you wrote - you're saying that most of the cast were not professional actors, but that this didn't ruin the film (?) - this is how I personally would edit some sections of it for grammar only (I like the overall wording and tone of it as is):
...Even though I was bothered some by the inexperienced acting from most of the
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