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Short summary:
He knows he only has a year to live, and he decides to accompany his sons even after his death. He believes that death may be able to keep him but not rip his love off his two sons.
Long Summary:
Following his father's advice, Satya is conservative and keeps a cold distance with his wife. Following his father's advice, Cakra is too busy with his career hence staying single. Following her husband's advice, Itje does not ask for her sons' help despite her many problems. Following his intuition, Gunawan has recorded a series of videos filled with life's advices before his death, deciding that death may be able to keep him, but not his love for his family.
Short summary:
He knows he only has a year to live, and he decides to accompany his sons even after his death. He believes that death may be able to keep him but not rip his love off his two sons.
Long Summary:
Following his father's advice, Satya is conservative and keeps a cold distance with his wife. Following his father's advice, Cakra is too busy with his career hence staying single. Following her husband's advice, Itje does not ask for her sons' help despite her many problems. Following his intuition, Gunawan has recorded a series of videos filled with life's advices before his death, deciding that death may be able to keep him, but not his love for his family.
Top answer
Short summary: He Gunawan knows he only has a year to live, and but he decides vows to accompany his sons even after his death. He believes that death may be able to keep take him but not rip take away his love off for his two sons. The long summary doesn't work for me.
- Short summary: He Gunawan knows he only has a year to live, and but he decides vows to accompany his sons even after his death.
- He believes that death may be able to keep take him but not rip take away his love off for his two sons.
- The long summary doesn't work for me.
- I suggest you rewrite it.
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Short summary:
He Gunawan knows he only has a year to live, and but he decides vows to accompany his sons even after his death. He believes that death may be able to keep take him but not rip take away his love off for his two sons.
The long summa
The long summa
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Ok, please check the revised writing below:
After knowing the fact that he just only a year left, Gunawan decides his illness should not limit him to take care of his two sons, Satya dan Cakra. Instead he creates videos so that his wife and his sons can live without his lead. The recorded videos filled with life's advices before his death, deciding that death may be able to keep him, but
After knowing the fact that he just only a year left, Gunawan decides his illness should not limit him to take care of his two sons, Satya dan Cakra. Instead he creates videos so that his wife and his sons can live without his lead. The recorded videos filled with life's advices before his death, deciding that death may be able to keep him, but
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After knowing the fact finding out that he just has only a one year to live, left, Gunawan decides his illness should not limit stop him to from taking care of his two sons, Satya dan Cakra. Instead, he creates makes videos so that for his wife and (
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