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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
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Short plot
A mother, who works as a maid, decides to enroll in school as a student to make her aimless daughter realise that she should be pursuing dreams rather than being content with her reality.
Long Plot
A courageous mother who fights hard to fulfil her dreams. Chandra is a maid, whose only aim in life is to give a good education to her daughter Abu. Like every parent, she wants her daughter to be a doctor or an engineer. Unfortunately, Abu does not show any interest in education. Due to this attitude, Chandra worries about her daughter, Abu. So to change Abu’s perspective, Chandra enrolls into a school to make Abu understand the importance of education.
Short plot
A mother, who works as a maid, decides to enroll in school as a student to make her aimless daughter realise that she should be pursuing dreams rather than being content with her reality.
Long Plot
A courageous mother who fights hard to fulfil her dreams. Chandra is a maid, whose only aim in life is to give a good education to her daughter Abu. Like every parent, she wants her daughter to be a doctor or an engineer. Unfortunately, Abu does not show any interest in education. Due to this attitude, Chandra worries about her daughter, Abu. So to change Abu’s perspective, Chandra enrolls into a school to make Abu understand the importance of education.
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