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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
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Movie plot
Please help to correct my writing if there are any mistakes.
Short plot
A young man with a miserable life receives a news from his more-successful younger brother's marriage, and decides to bring a .
Long Plot
Ebi is a 27-year-old man whose life is not par to standards – he is jobless and constantly asks for his mother’s funding. When he receives the news that his more-successful younger brother is going to marry his longtime girlfriend, he is determined to find a .
Short plot
A young man with a miserable life receives a news from his more-successful younger brother's marriage, and decides to bring a .
Long Plot
Ebi is a 27-year-old man whose life is not par to standards – he is jobless and constantly asks for his mother’s funding. When he receives the news that his more-successful younger brother is going to marry his longtime girlfriend, he is determined to find a .
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Short plot
A young man with a miserable life receives a news from his more-successful younger brother's marriage, and decides to bring a plus one to his wedding party to prove that his life is not that miserable after all.
Long plot
Ebi is a 27-year-old man whose life is not par to standards – he is jobless and constantly asks for his mother’s funding. When he receives the news th
A young man with a miserable life receives a news from his more-successful younger brother's marriage, and decides to bring a plus one to his wedding party to prove that his life is not that miserable after all.
Long plot
Ebi is a 27-year-old man whose life is not par to standards – he is jobless and constantly asks for his mother’s funding. When he receives the news th
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news is uncountable. You can't receive a news.
. . . .receive some news . . .
. . . .receive some news . . .
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Basically, (plus one, +1 ) may refer to partner.
http://www.internetslang.com/_2B1-meaning-definition.asp
http://www.internetslang.com/_2B1-meaning-definition.asp
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Shouldn't that be written as +1 ?
If you are going to write, you need to decide who the intended audience is. Can they be expected to know internet or texting slang?
It's poor and even odd style to write standard English and throw in just one piece of slang.
If you are going to write, you need to decide who the intended audience is. Can they be expected to know internet or texting slang?
It's poor and even odd style to write standard English and throw in just one piece of slang.
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Yes sir, it should be written as +1. I was trying to post as +1 initially, but the system can’t detect the word, thus I changed it to (plus one). And also, what you’re saying is really true, I think most of the audience unable to understand the slang. Thank you for letting me know. Shall I replace the word with “partner”?
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Thank you.
Please let me know if there's any grammatical mistakes?
Short plot
A young man with a miserable life receives a news from his more-successful younger brother's marriage, and decides to bring a partner to his wedding party to prove that his life is not that miserable after all.
Long plot
Ebi is a 27-year-old man whose life is not par to standards – he
Please let me know if there's any grammatical mistakes?
Short plot
A young man with a miserable life receives a news from his more-successful younger brother's marriage, and decides to bring a partner to his wedding party to prove that his life is not that miserable after all.
Long plot
Ebi is a 27-year-old man whose life is not par to standards – he
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Jenn123newsfromhis more-successful younger brother's marriage
Jenn123Ebi is a 27-year-old man whose life is not all that greatpar to standards– he is jobless and constantly asksforhis mother for money.’s funding.
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