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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

movie plot

Hi, would you please help me to check my grammatical mistakes in my writing below?

Short description
Three drug smugglers are tasked to transport a car coated in cocaine, but their carelessness leads them to drive the wrong car in similar color.

Long description
A drug mafia leader Arjun with the help of scientist Prem and Taya finds an ingenious way of transporting cocaine by painting it on an old car. The task of taking the an old car to Tamarin is given to three conmen . Taking the assignment lightly, the trio gets drunk and drives off another car in similar color. Now the threesome must find a way to regain the car which containing cocaine.
  

Top answer

Okay, making as few changes as possible, I would say it like this: Three drug smugglers are tasked to transport a car coated in cocaine, but their carelessness leads them to drive off in the wrong car in similar color . A D rug M afia leader Arjun , with the help of scientist s Prem and Taya , finds an ingenious way of transporting cocaine by painting it on an old car. The task of taking the an old car to Tamarin is given to three con men .

— Doctor D

  • Okay, making as few changes as possible, I would say it like this: Three drug smugglers are tasked to transport a car coated in cocaine, but their carelessness leads them to drive off in the wrong car in similar color .
  • A D rug M afia leader Arjun , with the help of scientist s Prem and Taya , finds an ingenious way of transporting cocaine by painting it on an old car.
  • The task of taking the an old car to Tamarin is given to three con men .
  • Taking the assignment lightly, the trio gets drunk and drives off another car in of similar color.
  • Now the threesome must find a way to regain the car which contain s ing the cocaine.
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Okay, making as few changes as possible, I would say it like this:

Three drug smugglers are tasked to transport a car coated in cocaine, but their carelessness leads them to drive off in the wrong car in similar color.

A Drug Mafia leader Arjun, with the help of scientists Prem and Taya, finds an ingenious wa
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