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BW2/3 Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

movie

What drew me into the movie in the beginning was not the plot, but was the action that I had never seen it before.

Is the above sentence correct?

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This is how I would phrase it "What drew me into the movie in the beginning was not the plot, but was the action / scenary/ special effects which that I had never seen in other movie s it before.

— Goodman

  • This is how I would phrase it "What drew me into the movie in the beginning was not the plot, but was the action / scenary/ special effects which that I had never seen in other movie s it before.
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This is how I would phrase it "What drew me into the movie in the beginning was not the plot, but was the action / scenary/ special effects which that I had never seen in other movies it be
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Thank you goodman,

Why did you delete 'in the beginning'?
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What first drew me into the movie was not the plot, but the action. I had never seen (?anything like it) it before.
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GoodmanThis is how I would phrase it "What drew me into the movie in the beginning was not the plot, but was the action / scenary/ special effects which that I had never seen in other movies
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