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Move upwards

I am trying to explain how a volcanic island is formed. If you see any mistakes in the following sentnece, can I have your comments?

A new eruption will make the cones move upward the sea and a volcanic island is formed.
  

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Each new eruption builds the cone upward from the seabed, and a volcanic island is eventually formed.

  • Each new eruption builds the cone upward from the seabed, and a volcanic island is eventually formed.
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Each new eruption builds the cone upward from the seabed, and a volcanic island is eventually formed.

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