Mountainhiker HELP

Hi,

I have no idea who you are, where you are, what an "eop" is, etc.

You can post what you have created and we can try to help you from there.

I or someone else will see what we can do.

MountainHiker

eop is a finacial assistance program that i really need to be accepted into in order to go to school. here's what i have so far;

the black and white photograph/an autobiographical essay-hiedi
(photograph)

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"(Alice) 'would you tell me please which way i ought to go from here?'
'that all depends a good deal on where you want to get to, ' said the Cat.
'i don

Hi,

It absolutely drives me nuts when people don't bother to capitalize their sentences and write "I" using "i". It says to me, "I am too darn lazy to bother to correctly write my stuff to you." Now, I have to waste my time fixing your sentences. I don't like it. Please read the instructions. Please .

Second thought, you do it. I am too lazy to capitalize your sentences.

i didn't know i had to be an english professor before i could post here, terribly sorry. i dont' know How to write an essay! that's Why i asked for help not to be crapped upon. i woked my *** off all night on that. i suck at writing, i accept that. so help me if you're gonna help. i dont' know how to start it i can't write and outline to save my life. so help me, plz.

i'm sorry i'm Tiered and Frustraighted, and that wasn't very helpful critisim at all. other then telling me i suck at writing... which i'm already quite aware of. i'm applying to major in adolesent edu/mathmatics and a focus in photography. i want to become a math teacher and eventually one at a college level. i want to do this because i love math and it comes naturally to me. i had the most ama

Hi,

The challenge is yours. I will help you, but I won't write your essay for you. They are looking to see you express yourself.

If I were you, I would have an outline similar to the following:

1) Who you are and what your ultimate career goal is.

2) Describe your strengths. Give evidence of your strengths.

3) Describe what you want to achiev

Thank you, the reason I don't punctuate and capitalise is partly because I have VERY poor grammer. I Need this essay though. Every essay in my life can suck after this one. There is no set length stated or any other provisions. It simply said to include an autobiographical essay. Thank you, I know you're helping because you want to and I do appreciate it a great deal.
Should i start more l

Okay i'm gonna try and just start one at a time.
1> Who am I and what is my ultimate career goal?
I have trouble with the Who am I, part. I really don't know how to answer that. Do they want to know who I am or do they want facts like birthdate, siblings, place of residence? I feel dry and nothing like who I really am writing dry facts with no creativity. That's why I thought if i st

Thank you, I'm feeling better taking it in small bites.
2 What are my strengths?
My strengths are paitents, endurence... or rather lack of ablity to give up, willingness and disire to learn about myself and everything around me. My other strengths are artisic. I enjoy expressing myself and how I see life and the world around me, through photography, sketchings, paintings and clay. I am

ham81,

Your first attempt an essay is pretty much wasted. Not much to use there.

What is your deadline? Given your prompt attention, I am guessing your deadline is very soon.

You're not giving me much to work with. You like teaching, you want to work with the deaf, you like photography. I don't know you, nor do I know your life experiences. You have to weave all