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Contiluo Posted 12 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Mount Tai
Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!
Are you on the way to Mount Tai now? It seems a long journey from Shanghai to Mount Tai, Shandong. I wonder how many hours it will take you to get there. Do you go there by train or plane? Mom just remitted NT$ 21,500 to you, including NT$ 500 processing fee. Is it enough for your expenditure? You have reached your quota, so try to control your expense. Besides, the service charge is high, so do not withdraw your money from the ATM by many times, but by one time as possible as you can. Have a nice trip!
Are you on the way to Mount Tai now? It seems a long journey from Shanghai to Mount Tai, Shandong. I wonder how many hours it will take you to get there. Do you go there by train or plane? Mom just remitted NT$ 21,500 to you, including NT$ 500 processing fee. Is it enough for your expenditure? You have reached your quota, so try to control your expense. Besides, the service charge is high, so do not withdraw your money from the ATM by many times, but by one time as possible as you can. Have a nice trip!
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Here is natural English. Are you on the way to Mount Tai now? It seems a long way from Shanghai.
- Here is natural English.
- Are you on the way to Mount Tai now?
- It seems a long way from Shanghai.
- How many hours will it take you to get there?
- Are you going by train or flying?
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Here is natural English.
Are you on the way to Mount Tai now? It seems a long way from Shanghai. How many hours will it take you to get there? Are you going by train or flying? Mom just sent you NT$ 21,500, including a NT$ 500 processing fee. Is that enough? Mom can't afford any more, so try not to spend a lot. Besides, the
Are you on the way to Mount Tai now? It seems a long way from Shanghai. How many hours will it take you to get there? Are you going by train or flying? Mom just sent you NT$ 21,500, including a NT$ 500 processing fee. Is that enough? Mom can't afford any more, so try not to spend a lot. Besides, the
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