Motivational letter help

hey there , discovered this forum just recently and the answers are very helpful so i decided to ask for help myself. I'm gonna submit my mot. letter tomorrow so i would like to get a 3rd persons opinion and advices on how to make it better. Thanks in advance , and also english is not my native language so i would appreciate it if you corrected my mistakes as well.

To whom it may concern
I am writing to apply for the Bachelor’s Degree program in Software Engineering at the xxx University of Applied Sciences.
I have always been interested in computer software and the way they affect our daily life. Nowadays ,many things, such as wind turbines , trains , airplanes, cameras , even the advancement of science itself rely heavily on computer software and being able to study the way they are developed is my main goal. Thinking about my future career I see myself in a position which is related to IT/software development.
Problem solving is something that really excites me. I feel that I need a job where I can experience and learn new things every day and software engineering presents me the opportunity to do so. I have a strong sense of responsibility and handle the tasks I am given timely and carefully. I am also able to openly communicate with my teachers and ask for help or guidance regarding the tasks I am given , shall I run into any obstacles. I am aware of the importance of teamwork and hard work, as they are the cornerstones of success. By attending your university , I am also willing to improve my teamwork capabilities to an even higher level.
I believe that the xxx University of Applied Sciences is a good start for my education in this field since it is a very renowned university in the Netherlands. I expect to be able to start a successful career after my graduation. Moreover , I am really interested in learning about new cultures so the opportunity to meet other international students who are also interested in software engineering is of something that I put much value upon. I hope that the diversity and the academic excellence of the Bachelor’s program will bring out the best of me.
Having done research , I came to the conclusion that your university would suit me the best. I have heard a lot of positive feedback from acquaintances about this specific program and that is one of my main reasons for choosing your university. Another major reason why I chose xxx is because it provides me with the opportunity not only to get theoretical knowledge , but also practical experience which makes it a lot easier for me to start a career in the future.Finally , the chance to study in an international environment would be a tremendous opportunity for me since I am very eager to communicate and study in English.
Thank you very much for your time and for considering my request. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
all 3 of my names