Motivational Letter For An Art Academy?

I would like to ask someone to make corrections to my motivation letter. Thanks.

Dear..

Im writing to apply as an student for the fain art program.
During my 20 years of my practice, I have accumulated a lot of knowledge as a street artist, working with different types of paints and spray paints and using different surfaces. For the last 3 years I have been working with oil and canvas as well as metal and sculpture. Through my artistic practice, I explore the flexibility of shapes, colors and balancing on the edge in-between abstraction and figuration. I'm interested in the question of human existence as one integral system
I am quite used to moving to another city or country . I lived in Ireland, Sweden, Finland and in Denmark at the moment. Im worked as a volunteer in various art organizations and in the one museum, my friends and I also organized one exhibition in Copenhagen. That is, it is not new for me to immerse myself in a new culture and environment. It gives me a different view of the world from different angles. In my free time I travel, climbing and photography.
I am curretly study in Krabbesholm High school in Skive on art program. I strive to realize my school projects by considering them visually. I also follow what is happening in the art world right now. I think yours academy and Fine Art program is ideal for me to continue my artistic practice.

Respectfully.