Motivational Letter for a denied Visa

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Hi Everybody.I really need some assistance. I recently applied for an American seasonal work visa (H2B) but was unfortunately denied because the telephone number on the letter head was non existent, (I cant believe it either). I am attempting to reapply for the visa and must provide an accompanying motivational letter. I am from South Africa and am going to america to work in a country club, I have been there once before last year for 6 months.I am well aware that this in not a letter writing service but was just wondering if the following issues/points are relevant to be incuded in the letter.* I am a recent graduated from University and hold a BCom Marketing Management degree* I hold a british passport (my parents are british) and thus have no intention of immigrating* Perhaps explain that there was a misunderstanding regarding the telephone number on the letter head and reiterate the fact that I am currently working for this company (on a part time basis) and will be returning to them to be employed in a full capacity.* I was issued an american visa before and returned within the allotted period* Perhaps finish off by saying that I enjoyed the diversity and cultural richness of the country and I want to bring the international "experience" and skill to be implemented into my current occupation in South Africa.I need to process this within the next day or two, please can anyone assist me urgently. Thank you in advance

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

Hi Binky:
You have listed very good points for your letter. Please just write the letter using these points and post it. We can then comment and make suggestions

Binky1 · Answer

Dear Sir/ Madam

My name is XXXXXXXXXX and I am XX years old. I am a recent graduate from the and hold a Bachelor of Commerce degree in Marketing Management.

I am currently working for XXXXXXXX as a marketing coordinator, on a part time basis, whereby I perform the administrative and data base work for the Human Resources Manager. My current position requires that I possess strong logical and organizational skills as well as good communication abilities.

I intend to travel to America to work at XXXXXXXXXXX located in as a server. Interacting with people of various cultures and backgrounds in terms of providing customer service as well as obtaining a comprehensive view of the diversity offered internationally is my motivation for working in . At XXXXXXXXXXXX one has the opportunity to share international experience within a team and thus the role of a server can be broken down as being able to develop and offer support and services whilst gaining a global degree of professionalism and knowledge in many aspects.

I intend to return to where I will be resuming my position at XXXXXXXXXXX on a full time basis and I will implement my Marketing degree. I believe the opportunity to travel abroad is extremely valuable as I can return with confidence and be able to put into practice the philosophy, values and beliefs obtained while abroad. As I have majored in Business Management I aim to apply the knowledge I will gain about business processes to my profession.

I trust my academic background, work experience and strong financial ties to South Africa will provide a sufficient indication in being a successful candidate for a H2B working Visa to the United States of America.

Sincerely

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Clarification of name

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Binky - Good job! I have made some suggestions for your letter. It is better to keep things direct and simple, rather than using complex sentences which are harder to read.

binky1Dear Sir/ Madam

My name is *** and I am *** years old. I am a recent graduate from the University of *** and hold a Bachelor of Commerce degree in Marketing Management.

I am currently working for *** as a marketing coordinator, on a part time basis, whereby I perform the administrative tasks and data base entry ~~work~~ for the Human Resources Manager. My current position requires that I possess strong logical and organizational skills as well as good communication abilities.

I intend to travel to America to work at *** located in Boca Raton, Florida as a server. My motive in leaving my current position and working in Florida is to interact~~ing~~ with people of various cultures and backgrounds, to learn professional customer service, gain international experience for my CV, and develop my knowlege and team working skills. in terms of providing customer service as well as obtaining a comprehensive view of the diversity offered internationally is my motivation for working in Florida. At *** one has the opportunity to share international experience within a team and thus the role of a server can be broken down as being able to develop and offer support and services whilst gaining a global degree of professionalism and knowledge in many aspects.

After *** months, I intend to return to South Africa where I will be resuming my position at *** on a full time basis making use of my degree in Marketing ~~and I will implement my Marketing degree~~. I believe the opportunity to travel abroad is extremely valuable as I can return with confidence and be able to put into practice the philosophy, values and beliefs obtained while abroad. As I have majored in Business Management I aim to apply the knowledge I will gain about business processes to my profession.

I trust my academic background, work experience and strong financial ties to South Africa will provide a sufficient indication in being a successful candidate for a H2B working Visa to the United States of America.

Sincerely

Signature

Clarification of name

Binky1 · Answer

AlpheccaStars

Thanks so much for all your help, its great to see that there are still good people out there that want to help others.

Thanks again!

Binky:)

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