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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Motivational Letter - Bachelor's study in the Netherlands
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I am applying for a bachelor's program in the netherlands and it would be nice if you could check my motivational letter and help me to improve it. Thank you!
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the Bachelor‘s Degree program in International Logistics and Economics at the XXX.
As long as I remember myself I've always been interested in logistic processes and economy in general. That is why, when I had to choose the direction in which I may specialize at school, I've choosen the economic direction. This made my decision about starting a career in the economic sector easier. The reason why I want to study International Logistics and Economics is that I also want to learn more about transport and logistic since I've always found it fascinating how it is possible to manage logistic processes in the most efficient and smooth way.
I would like to study at the XXX because it's an opportunity which I can't dismiss. I think that this bachelor's program combines all of my interestes so that I can't imagine that there is any bachelor's program which suits me more. The fact that the XXX is the best large University of Applied Science in the Netherlands according to XXX impresses me the most. Another reason for studying abroad is to get in contact with students from different countries and to learn more about the different cultures and mentalities.
My future plan is to start my career in an international company after I've graduated from XXX and maybe even to stay in the Netherlands. I would like to work in the logistics sector and to incorporate my own company one day. It would be great if I could achieve my future goals based on the knowledge which has been acquired to me at the XXX.
Yours faithfully,
XXX
I am applying for a bachelor's program in the netherlands and it would be nice if you could check my motivational letter and help me to improve it. Thank you!
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the Bachelor‘s Degree program in International Logistics and Economics at the XXX.
As long as I remember myself I've always been interested in logistic processes and economy in general. That is why, when I had to choose the direction in which I may specialize at school, I've choosen the economic direction. This made my decision about starting a career in the economic sector easier. The reason why I want to study International Logistics and Economics is that I also want to learn more about transport and logistic since I've always found it fascinating how it is possible to manage logistic processes in the most efficient and smooth way.
I would like to study at the XXX because it's an opportunity which I can't dismiss. I think that this bachelor's program combines all of my interestes so that I can't imagine that there is any bachelor's program which suits me more. The fact that the XXX is the best large University of Applied Science in the Netherlands according to XXX impresses me the most. Another reason for studying abroad is to get in contact with students from different countries and to learn more about the different cultures and mentalities.
My future plan is to start my career in an international company after I've graduated from XXX and maybe even to stay in the Netherlands. I would like to work in the logistics sector and to incorporate my own company one day. It would be great if I could achieve my future goals based on the knowledge which has been acquired to me at the XXX.
Yours faithfully,
XXX
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Here are some suggestions.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the Bachelor‘s Degree program in International Logistics and Economics at the ***.
As long as I can remembermyself I've always been interested in logistical processes and the economy in general. That is why, when I had to choose the direction in which to
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the Bachelor‘s Degree program in International Logistics and Economics at the ***.
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I've improved my letter a little bit. I don't know if I should add something to it since there isnt mentioned anything about the contet of it on the website. What do you think?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the Bachelor‘s Degree program in International Logistics and Economics at the ***.
As long as I canremember myself I've always been intereste
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remember myself is wrong.
You can remember a fact, a vacation, a book, a dream, but not yourself.
in which to I may is wrong.
the Economics is wrong. No article (the, a) before Mathematics, History, or other academic topics.
Your ideas are very very general. Perhaps 90% of the other motivation letters will say the same general stu
You can remember a fact, a vacation, a book, a dream, but not yourself.
in which to I may is wrong.
the Economics is wrong. No article (the, a) before Mathematics, History, or other academic topics.
Your ideas are very very general. Perhaps 90% of the other motivation letters will say the same general stu
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