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Luhas Knobloch Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Motivational letter
Hey everyone,
I really appreciate, if somebody will take the time to look at my motivational letter and give me a feedback. I will be grateful if you can provide me any help.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Lukas Knobloch and I am 23 years old. Currently I am participating in “The Europeans Project” as a mechatronics technician at Werner-von-Siemens Werkberufsschule (Vocational School) in Berlin, Germany. I am going to finish it in January 2017. Before I started my apprenticeship in Berlin, I graduated from technical lyceum VOŠ a SPŠ Šumperk, Czech Republic. I would be pleased if you could accept my application for the program Bachelor of Export and Technology Management University College of Northern Denmark.
Studying and living abroad has influenced my life greatly. In my opinion, there could not be a better way of showing me ropes of life than through the past 3 years. I have learned about new cultures and got many international friends. I realized that studying in a foreign country can be a good way to improve my skills and give me a good start in working life. During my apprenticeship, there were a lot of workshop activities, labs, team projects and individual work – so different from what I was used to in my school back home. My last team project entailed building an automatic production line of wind turbine models. I was responsible for creating a model of a wind turbine in CAD program Siemens NX and with the help of two other classmates; built a 3D printer to produce these models.
Studying at university in Denmark would be a great opportunity for me to get know Danish culture, language, people and to familiarize myself with the happiest country in the world. The rating of Denmark’s education system made a great impression on me. High level of teaching methods with industrial collaborations can promote my ability to use what I have learned and to turn new knowledge into innovative solutions.
In my opinion, my strengths include being well-organized, determined and my sense of responsibility.I have organized couple parkour meetings in my home city and have been giving snowboard instruction during the winter season. Additionally, I have attended classes inpublic speaking that have helped me to give speeches in front of a group of people and improved my presentation skills.
I believe, UCN is a university where my passion – a combination of technology and management – will grow. I´m looking forward to be interested in subjects with economic background like Market understanding and The selling organization, which can help my entrepreneurial skills along.
Thank you for considering my application.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Lukas Knobloch
I really appreciate, if somebody will take the time to look at my motivational letter and give me a feedback. I will be grateful if you can provide me any help.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Lukas Knobloch and I am 23 years old. Currently I am participating in “The Europeans Project” as a mechatronics technician at Werner-von-Siemens Werkberufsschule (Vocational School) in Berlin, Germany. I am going to finish it in January 2017. Before I started my apprenticeship in Berlin, I graduated from technical lyceum VOŠ a SPŠ Šumperk, Czech Republic. I would be pleased if you could accept my application for the program Bachelor of Export and Technology Management University College of Northern Denmark.
Studying and living abroad has influenced my life greatly. In my opinion, there could not be a better way of showing me ropes of life than through the past 3 years. I have learned about new cultures and got many international friends. I realized that studying in a foreign country can be a good way to improve my skills and give me a good start in working life. During my apprenticeship, there were a lot of workshop activities, labs, team projects and individual work – so different from what I was used to in my school back home. My last team project entailed building an automatic production line of wind turbine models. I was responsible for creating a model of a wind turbine in CAD program Siemens NX and with the help of two other classmates; built a 3D printer to produce these models.
Studying at university in Denmark would be a great opportunity for me to get know Danish culture, language, people and to familiarize myself with the happiest country in the world. The rating of Denmark’s education system made a great impression on me. High level of teaching methods with industrial collaborations can promote my ability to use what I have learned and to turn new knowledge into innovative solutions.
In my opinion, my strengths include being well-organized, determined and my sense of responsibility.I have organized couple parkour meetings in my home city and have been giving snowboard instruction during the winter season. Additionally, I have attended classes inpublic speaking that have helped me to give speeches in front of a group of people and improved my presentation skills.
I believe, UCN is a university where my passion – a combination of technology and management – will grow. I´m looking forward to be interested in subjects with economic background like Market understanding and The selling organization, which can help my entrepreneurial skills along.
Thank you for considering my application.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Lukas Knobloch
Top answer
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Lukas Knobloch and I am 23 years old. I wish to apply for the Bachelor of Export and Technology Management program at University College of Northern Denmark. Currentl y, I am participating in “ The Europeans Project ” as a mechatronics technician at Werner-von-Siemens Werkberufsschule (Vocational School) in Berlin, Germany.
- Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Lukas Knobloch and I am 23 years old.
- I wish to apply for the Bachelor of Export and Technology Management program at University College of Northern Denmark.
- Currentl y, I am participating in “ The Europeans Project ” as a mechatronics technician at Werner-von-Siemens Werkberufsschule (Vocational School) in Berlin, Germany.
- I am going expect to finish it in January 2017.
- Before I started my apprenticeship in Berlin, I graduated from technical lyceum VOŠ a SPŠ Šumperk technical lyceum , Czech Republic.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Lukas Knobloch and I am 23 years old. I wish to apply for the Bachelor of Export and Technology Management program at University College of Northern Denmark. Currently, I am participating in “The Europeans Project” as a mechatronics technician at Werner-von-Siemens Werkberufsschule (Vocational Schoo
My name is Lukas Knobloch and I am 23 years old. I wish to apply for the Bachelor of Export and Technology Management program at University College of Northern Denmark. Currently, I am participating in “The Europeans Project” as a mechatronics technician at Werner-von-Siemens Werkberufsschule (Vocational Schoo
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Thanks a lot Teechr for taking the time and correcting it!
It´s called trainee program or apprenticeship, do you think, it would be better write that?
I meant a couple od parkour meetings.
Lukas
It´s called trainee program or apprenticeship, do you think, it would be better write that?
I meant a couple od parkour meetings.
Lukas
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Luhas KnoblochIt´s called trainee program or apprenticeship. Do you think it would be better to write that?Yes. Use the exact name.
Luhas KnoblochI meant a couple of parkour meetings.Then say that.
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