motivational letter

Dear sir
I am applying to your master program of " Masters in Advance Architecture Design " starting in September 2015 . My career ambition is to become a professional architect with knowledge of bio-mimicry & articulation of spaces and their relation to the building envelope or fabrication geometry .
To be an architect wasn't option for me , it was a choice which was taken since childhood, from the day when my father bring drafted plans from architect of our house and after watching them I always had a wish to know how they draw every line with so much accuracy with such small furniture layout . With passage of time I get to understand about architecture and most of all it adores me because of its vast dimensional openings to the line of creativity . So much passion with this profession I always try to draw sketches of plans and look them in architecture books and try to understand them more before learning it properly in graduate school .most of all it makes me think how a movement to single wall can change the whole living style of human being .
Through my all over brought up having thinking over specific field I didn't changed my decision and took admission in architecture department of graduate school "CECOS University ", Peshawar and start my journey to the field of dreams for me . As I was always counted as top design student throughout my 5 years of graduate school , mostly my designs were inspired by nature and concept of its interlinked cycle which always amazed me and helped me to create design with unique approach of programming spaces and their feeling .
Due to of my such thinking and designing skills I have achieved several awards & titles as in , title winner of wall graffiti in naqsh all Pakistan art festival , award winner of ad making in lumps Olympiad , was selected in 25 top design students of Pakistan for a student based design project of " library " in iapex 2013 Islamabad , where as I have topped my thesis project within university and it is also selected for the " kousar basheer award " ; best thesis on social responsive architecture in Pakistan.
Apart from my studies, I acted as a team leader for most of the events which were organized by university and also student leader for a society of our university and worked voluntarily in it. Through these experiences, I strengthened my interpersonal skills by working with fellow team members and others.
After my academic time period , I start working with a firm and start trying to understand the limitation and beauty of practicality of architecture which makes me think over that for an architect how much important it is to be a good problem solver . Since march of 2014 up till now I had done 5 commercial projects and more 15 residential projects which were handled as a team . Throughout my all experiences in professional and academic learning of architecture , thinking over building envelop and its fabrication is always one of the most interesting part for me and program which your university is offering will polish my skills to think over building envelop more .
Given my past history of commitment to excellence, I am confident that I will bring a high level of energy and enthusiasm to your program. I am sure to exceed your expectations, because of both my academic and interpersonal skills as well as the experience gained from my professional practice . I will enrich the program by enabling fellow students and professors to benefit from my ambitious and open nature.
Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to your acceptance.

Sincerely yours,